We are so grateful to Amy for inviting us to share our thinking about our notebooks on her blog today! We're all writers from the WNY Young Writer's Studio, and our notebooks help us gather our ideas, tinker with our drafts, hold on to important strategies, and reflect on what we do. It's exciting to meet other people who love notebooks as much as we do in this space. We hope you enjoy your peek into ours!
Erin with her Notebook
Hi! I’m Erin. I love to use my notebook to brainstorm new ideas. I am inspired by nature, and I love to draw too. This is where most of my ideas come from. The picture below shows you the beginning of a poem I am starting to write. It isn’t in lines yet, because the ideas are just coming to me. I thought of it by looking out the window at the trees while I was at the WNY Young Writer’s Studio. This is how many ideas come to me—by looking outside. Stop and look outside right now. What could you write about?
Beginning of a Poem
I also love to draw, and this is how many of my stories begin. In the picture below, I am drawing my characters from my story. During a conference, I used the picture to begin describing the story out loud, and those who were listening said that it seemed like my character would be experiencing a problem soon.
Drawing makes my characters and my story feel real. I use my drawings to talk about my characters with other people. Talking helps me come up with new ideas or details. Rather than writing your story, draw it. Then, talk about it with someone. Think about how drawing and then talking about your drawings makes your ideas better.
Erin Day is a 10 year old artist and writer at the WNY Young Writer’s Studio. Last spring, she published her first short story. It was about a tragedy that befell a granny smith apple. She sketched the story first and then talked it through with several others before adding words.
Peter with his Notebook
Hello. I am Peter, and this is my notebook. I use it to plan my stories. It has room for me to draw pictures. This is how I like to write because I am six, and sometimes, the words are hard to write for me. This slows down my writing. When I draw I can add lots of details fast and my story keeps moving. I like that.
If you look at my picture, you can see how I used my notebook to plan the beginning, the middle, and the end of my story. I started by drawing the pictures, and I had an older writer write my words for me. My story has seven characters. Some of them are monsters. I began my story by thinking about what my characters were doing. I added all of the action to my story first. This is what I like most about stories myself.
When I look at the pictures now, I notice details in the pictures that are not mentioned in the words. Now, I am going back and adding these details a little bit at a time. I’m using sticky notes to do this.
My notebook is a place where I can draw and write fast and be messy. I am just starting to get ideas. I will make them better and better. I will write my other fixed-up copies on lined paper or on the computer. My notebook is for making a plan.
Here is an idea for you to try: instead of using words to plan your story, try to use pictures. You can draw them or you can even use your camera to take them. Maybe you can find some in a magazine. See if the pictures help you add better details to your story plan.
Peter Kane is six years old and a fellow of the WNY Young Writer’s Studio. His stories are inspired by his favorite games, including Minecraft.
Julia and Sydney
Julia with her Notebook
Sydney with Her Notebook
Our writer’s notebooks are where we keep all kinds of ideas for our writing. We use lists and maps and sticky notes to keep track of our ideas. We also use make mini versions of the anchor charts at Studio and at those to our notebooks. Then, we can write and plan with them.
We recently decided to add little pockets to some of our notebook pages, and they have been very helpful.
Sydney's Notebook Pocket Words
The pockets are filled with words that help us think about our stories better. When we pull them out, they make us wonder things about our stories. Where could we add more action? What are our characters feeling? Should we add more drama to our stories? Where? When it comes to our stories, we come up with new things that we should be thinking about all of the time. These get added to slips of paper and tucked into the pockets.
Julia's Word Pocket and Personal Story Arc
Story Arc Anchor Chart
We are learning to think about the problems we have as writers. We use our notebooks to try to solve these problems. One problem we had was getting stuck for ideas while we were writing stories. Creating these pockets helps us. When we are stuck, we just pull out our words of inspiration, and they help us come up with better ideas. We also make lists of ideas too, like the colorful list in the picture.
Julia's Idea List
We made these tools all on our own. It kind of works like a game. Maybe you could try to do the same thing. Create a pocket for your writer’s notebook. Then, add all of the things that you could think about in order to make your writing better. When you get stuck, look at the words in your pocket. It helps!
Julia Flynn and Sydney Mosher are both 8 years old, and they love to write together at the WNY Young Writer’s Studio. They also like to invent writing strategies like these.
Angela has graciously offered a giveaway of DON'T FORGET TO WRITE, published by 826 National, and a new notebook to a commenter on this post. Please leave your words by Sunday, October 5, to be entered into the drawing. Thank you, young writers, and thank you, Angela!
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